'Honeymoon of Life..'

Energies of incalculability, chance, surprise, rapid change...!!!

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"On-board sociable journey..i patted my back..
Will i ever return gestures of affection pack..

Perception and impartiality kicked on tooth..
Exerting willpower on a war-like quality booth..

A committed relationship took stroll on jeweller..
The glorious sunshine by an innovative dweller..

Envelope focusing strategic energy of grim..
Making mountains out of molehill brim..

Are you in a talking mode..I ask the honeymoon of life..
Unexpected possibilities progressing charm and vivacity..

Standing behind steering wheels reserved and guarded..
Your shadow allowed my floral adrenalin flow in-warded..!!"

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Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the term "honeymoon of life". Can mean many things. I like your version of the term. Life is a funny journey. We hope one day to be in the honeymoon of life so we can enjoy life a like children again. I like ending. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Ms. Sarah..!!

[sarah]

A really interesting poem! keep up the great work!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Sunflower/Sara Kendrick..!!!

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Good couplets..Two word that stood out was affection and guarded..Sunflower

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you not your typical girl..!!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you not your typical girl..!!!

[MissWordSmith]

what is affection pack? lol.
war like quality booth?? kicked on tooth??
glorious sunshine by an innovative dweller?
WHAT DOES ANY OF THIS MEAN!! Words put together have to make SENSE too. or at least be metaphoric or SOMETHING. this is gibberish put together to make something sound like it rhymes.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Amanda..!!!

[Amanda]

Interesting, but good. The pentameter faltered a little in the second-to-last stanza, but it was otherwise a pleasant read.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thnxx Nothing Personal..!!