'Grasp my heart..'

A dedication for someone who you may never see but thy's imprint will remain engraved..engrossed..!!

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"Stay with me by my side..

To hold me on this marshy ride..

When i fail to defy self..

Give me your hand as help..

World will be a mere spectator..

Ready to project me a traitor..

I am scared of lonely night..

Spread the warmth of Divine Light..

Sky unfolds some pretty shades..

Grasp my heart before it fades..!!"

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Reviews

[Sports Girl]

I agree it was interesting, but it was good and the message was clear. Great job.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thanks Loving Angel..!!

[joshua deathdealer]

Interesting and well composed piece. Excellent work.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thanks joshua deathdealer..!!

[Nancy Martin]

Well written and very enjoyable!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thanks Nancy Martin!!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Ostensible Truth..!!!!

[OT]

very nice poem!!! well written, nice strong couplets woven around great imagery!!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Idaho Skye Writer..!!!

[TPK Stories]

Lovely poem.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Mike Florio..!!

[Moflo]

Nice little poem here. I feel like it could have some length added to it but otherwise its a very nice write with a great display of emotion. Good job!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you storiestotell..!!!