'Grasp my heart..'

'Grasp my heart..'

A Poem by Priyankaabhilaashi
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A dedication for someone who you may never see but thy's imprint will remain engraved..engrossed..!!

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"Stay with me by my side..
To hold me on this marshy ride..
When i fail to defy self..
Give me your hand as help..
World will be a mere spectator..
Ready to project me a traitor..
I am scared of lonely night..
Spread the warmth of Divine Light..
Sky unfolds some pretty shades..
Grasp my heart before it fades..!!"

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© 2011 Priyankaabhilaashi


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very nice write

Posted 13 Years Ago


Beautiful and peaceful this write is!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great, I love it as well.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice feel. Reveals itself like fine smoke, present, lingering and then gently gone. The rhyme didn't seem that evident,I like that. Good piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I liked it, especially the last line since it seemed to tie everything together for me. It's the real intent, in my mind, with every line prior pushing to get there. You write very well, sir.

Posted 13 Years Ago


very thought provoking, i really enjoyed reading this

Posted 13 Years Ago


Love this a lot, really well written and deep too; nice job!~

Posted 13 Years Ago


Thank you Charles..!!! This is a very raw work..written within minutes..!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Thank you Coyote..!! Thank you so much for the valuable input..!! Keep coming in..!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Good effort. I especially like the comparison of life to a 'marshy ride' and the soft rhyme between 'help' and 'self. The closing punctuation (...!!")is a bit much but not entirely out of line. :-)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Priyankaabhilaashi
Priyankaabhilaashi

Jaipur, India



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A traveller by choice..A writer by soul..!!!! A freelance writer..A Doctorate..A Management Graduate..!!!!! Born and brought up in Jaipur, The Pink City. You may read me here also: http://enri.. more..

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