'My Magical Obsessive Toy..'

'My Magical Obsessive Toy..'

A Poem by Priyankaabhilaashi
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Some magic happen like that..!!

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"Deep down the Memory Lane..
Walking on Aisle on a Rainy Day..

Found a Lovely Cute Flower..
Wrapped in a Bright Sunny Ray..

'Are angels a mystery?'..
Questioned a student of history..

Sprinkling droplets of joy..
My Magical Obsessive Toy..

Speechless persistence fall silently..
Soft words stretches the eternity..

Warm me, O My Dark Chocolate..
You are born to hold me, till late..!!"

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© 2011 Priyankaabhilaashi


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Thank you #1 Devoted Soap Fan..!!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Excellent poem...loved the use of rhyme and capitalization throughout the piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Thank you Nothing Personal...!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Yes magic is everywhere from the lovely cute flower you found to this piece of writing I'm reading..It's the perception, the look that enchants anything..Very sweet, touchy short poetry Priyanka..

Posted 13 Years Ago


Thank you storiestotell..!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Beautiful heart felt poem! Well written!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Thank you Coyote..!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


A beautiful poem. Each line strong and adding to the strength of the poem. I feel there is a lot more to this poem then the words will allow. I like the complete poem. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


Thank you Sweets..!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


this is awesome, nice use of rhymes :)
It shows how hard you worked on this poem
Great job!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on January 24, 2011
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Priyankaabhilaashi
Priyankaabhilaashi

Jaipur, India



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A traveller by choice..A writer by soul..!!!! A freelance writer..A Doctorate..A Management Graduate..!!!!! Born and brought up in Jaipur, The Pink City. You may read me here also: http://enri.. more..

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