'My Magical Obsessive Toy..'

Some magic happen like that..!!

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"Deep down the Memory Lane..

Walking on Aisle on a Rainy Day..

Found a Lovely Cute Flower..

Wrapped in a Bright Sunny Ray..

'Are angels a mystery?'..

Questioned a student of history..

Sprinkling droplets of joy..

My Magical Obsessive Toy..

Speechless persistence fall silently..

Soft words stretches the eternity..

Warm me, O My Dark Chocolate..

You are born to hold me, till late..!!"

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Reviews

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Marie Harrison..!!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Gaming Gal..!!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Angelina Paige..!!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Stefanie..!!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Cynthia..!!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Charles..!!

[Charles]

I like the notion of this obsessive toy. I especially like the last stanza. I do believe the English needs a little work (the small errors in syntax make reading difficult).

[Cynthia]

Sucha fun write, it do makes me shock or should I say laugh when I find out it is dark chocolate! Very nicely done!

[HopelesslyDevoted]

nicely done!

[Marie Harrison]

Very sweet!