'My Magical Obsessive Toy..'

Some magic happen like that..!!

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"Deep down the Memory Lane..

Walking on Aisle on a Rainy Day..

Found a Lovely Cute Flower..

Wrapped in a Bright Sunny Ray..

'Are angels a mystery?'..

Questioned a student of history..

Sprinkling droplets of joy..

My Magical Obsessive Toy..

Speechless persistence fall silently..

Soft words stretches the eternity..

Warm me, O My Dark Chocolate..

You are born to hold me, till late..!!"

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Reviews

[Stef Outsiders]

This is pretty, simply and smooth... i like it, well done!

[GamingGal]

Pros: I giggled when I found out that the "Magical Obsessive Toy" was dark chocolate. It's an interesting piece. The couplets flow nicely, and I can sense the obsession this person has with chocolate/this magical obsessive toy.

Cons: None, really.

Overall: This poem made me giggle, which is an accomplishment in itself :)

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Sarah Willingham..!!!

[sarah]

YES! lol Love this!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Liza with a Z!....

[Liza]

vivid imagery sparking imagination yet still abstract ~ to me...

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank You Arsenic Nemesis..!!!

[Arsenic Nemesis]

I liked this, nicely written and very well presented, great job~