'A Tough Bay..'
A Poem by Priyankaabhilaashi
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"You hold my heart on a rough day..
You chose my breath on a tough bay..
How could you stake your precious pearl..
I was simply, a torn-off bruised worthless ray..!!"
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© 2011 Priyankaabhilaashi
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I love the meaning of this poem! Very sad too!
Posted 13 Years Ago
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you amaze me with your short poems... well done!
Posted 13 Years Ago
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wonderful wording, and very captivating concept! excellent!
Posted 13 Years Ago
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A lot of hidden story in these words. Each line with a reason to be written. I like the beginning. A sad ending to a powerful short poem. A excellent poem.
Coyote
Posted 13 Years Ago
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Added on February 26, 2011
Last Updated on February 26, 2011
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PriyankaabhilaashiJaipur, India
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A traveller by choice..A writer by soul..!!!!
A freelance writer..A Doctorate..A Management Graduate..!!!!! Born and brought up in Jaipur, The Pink City.
You may read me here also:
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