The two oceans

This poem describe a person's love for his girl.....#Simple, But true......

I see two oceans, full of happiness
They are calm, which I see
Full of love, just as thee...

Let the water churn, let it foam
Let me dive in it, let me roam
I wanna go deep,
In the eyes you have.
and let the water seep,
from the oceans which they keep.

How much I love you, words can't tell,
my heart just rings ding-dong like a bell.
I,the Beau,promise to you...
When you call i'll come,
Even if I have to go through hell.

Deep inside I care for you,
my life line too has a share for you.
I dreamt about you,when I was small and when I grew...
All my words are nothing but TRUE!!!

Reviews

[micky]

This is simply amazing and beautiful...i really love this piece
Well done:)

[Pratyush Choudhary]

Oh thank you....It's my first one.. :)

[micky]

Its amazing for a first.....my first poem was horrible...well done