What am I feeling?

What am I feeling now?

Just a tempering bulge of volcano.

The red, dark orange

Melting charcoal heart

Dripping pain from it

Still sticking to some parts of body.

 

I am curbed in a spider web

A black death smelling cave.

I am half dead asleep

Wih each inch of my flesh

Dripping my scream out

As I cannot shout anymore

 

Bit by bit life comes backs

Heap by heap pain raises

Drip by drip tears fall out

And moment by moment I fall back asleep.

 

A moment switching between the battle

Of life and death

One wins, the other fights back

The fun they are really enjoying

I am trenched in between them both.

 

A flick opens my eyes.

The dark endless charcoal walls at all ends

No hand pulling me towards

That little light.

No breath pumping me

Through the living world.

 

I am sweating

I can feel the wet cool

Tshirt over my chest

A t-shirt which is calling me naked from most parts.

 

I can smell the rotten flesh

A little drip falls on my eyes

And it opens immediately

To look up at anything that can help

 

It’s not the sweat

A white color T-shirt

That has now changed to red

A bunch of beasts jumping to get hold of me

Maybe, I could be a delicious treat

 

A moment again and the screeching voices

Of hungry demons is gone

Thanks a lot dear lord

Although I am dead for million counts .

But, now it feels great to die again.

 

 

Author's Note

Just a random, dark, horror, dream.

Reviews

[SaraJayne96]

It seems you are stuck in a loop of night terrors and every time you die, you welcome that death with peace and calm.

[Frieda P]

Sounds like a horrific nightmare, life can be that way some days. Enjoyed your dark side of the moon, nicely pen'd.

[prodicallife]

Dear Frieda,

I feel so welcoming seeing you on my wall.

I have a smile on my face, after reading this review of yours.

You are so good with the appreciation. I am honored.

I would appreciate your reviews over my other works too.

Thanks a lot!!

Stay blessed
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[PoetryPenPal]

That was a good poem! You had a slight spelling mistake though, you forgot the T in with. Great work otherwise!

[prodicallife]

Dear Writer,

Thanks for reviewing my work with those appreciating words.

Yes I see that, a typographical mistake.

Thanks for informing.

Stay blessed
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[PoetryPenPal]

My pleasure!

[Coyote Poetry]

A wild dream. The dreams are the highway to real life. This dream mean struggle and decisions to be made. I like the description leading to the powerful ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[prodicallife]

Dear Coyote,

Thanks for Reviewing it with so appreciating words.

I am much appreciated.

Thanks,
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[R. L. Hill]

This is spooky. It feels dream-like which I enjoy. I believe dreams are extremely powerful, and yours left me frightened. It felt endless. Is this recurring? Brilliant write.

[prodicallife]

Dear Quirklet,

Thanks for reviewing my work so wonderfully.

I am honored to hear that from your end. This dream is just an imagination that I did.

Thanks a lot.

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[SANDEEP SHETTY]

well....you conveyed so much....thanks for sharing!!!!

[prodicallife]

Dear Sandeep,

Firstly, welcome to my wall. I hope you enjoyed a walk around my wall.read moreDear Sandeep,

Firstly, welcome to my wall. I hope you enjoyed a walk around my wall.

Thanks for visiting!!

I am again very thank full for that wonderful reviews from your end. Thanks for appreciating me.

Stay blessed
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[Praveeta]

This is scary. Your choice of words and composition is great. Thanks for sharing.

[prodicallife]

Hahahahahahaha 😄

Dear Praveeta,

That was the aim of my write.
read moreHahahahahahaha 😄

Dear Praveeta,

That was the aim of my write.

To deliver that feeling inside me through ink.

Thanks for the review.

Stay blessed
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[Praveeta]

And you have succeeded :)

[Bri]

Awesome! It just has so much strength and depth that just gives me the chills! It's amazing! It literally scared me the way you could explain such emptiness and horror!
Well done, friend.

[prodicallife]

Dear Just

Thanks a lot for that appreciating review of your.

It feels great

Stay blessed
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[Ruth]

Vicious cycle here...dark and unsettling but not without insight and some light left remaining, a process one is accepting of...within such darkness, there are doorways, enough to find the sunshine again, beautifully woven x

[prodicallife]

Dear Poppy

Thanks a lot for your appreciating words.

Stay blessed😊
read moreDear Poppy

Thanks a lot for your appreciating words.

Stay blessed😊
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