STUPID RAIN

At times it`s best to write something down when you cannot stack your feeling any further.

                        STUPID RAIN

I watched the dancing rain

It sang the same song again

The sound of each drop falling down

Calling your name as it touches the ground

 

Yes I am lost somewhere

The path that leads nowhere

Why the curse targeted me?

The only sound I can hear

 

Slowly the sound of drops is fading away

Now I am moving into the time you walked away

I am holding the pieces of broken picture frame

That beautiful opera of love sounding mayhem

 

The same feelings, the same pain

Has taken over me once again

The rolling tears made me realize

That my condition is still the same

Then my thoughts came to life

I surrendered myself to the rain

How lovingly it wiped my tears

And promised to never let me cry again

 

Wouldn`t you come and hold me again

Touch me softly and remove the pain

Stupid rain is trying to take your place

Come and tell it, you wouldn`t let me cry as always….

I LOVE YOU

 

 

Author's Note

I kept it very simple i don`t know why no vocabs used here just simple words. Hope you all like it.

Reviews

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Wonderful, deep write. You express your emotions well.

[Xicor]

"Slowly the sound of drops is fading away

Now I am moving into the time you walked away

I am holding the pieces of broken picture frame

That beautiful opera of love sounding mayhem"

Just loved this verse...on the whole I would say the feelings you wanted to depict here...quite conveniently and beautifully came out...Wonderful work ! :)

[Megan]

This is so lovely, it flows so well and it's so..soothing. It may talk about heartbreak but it's just so smooth and soft with the way the rhythm is. It makes me think of warm summer rains, when the sun's still out, barely peeking form behind the clouds. Drizzling in my yard while I sit in the front porch swing just listening to it hit the ground. The air cool and refreshing. So great :) Thanks for posting this, I loved reading it!!

[Sindhuja Seshadri]

Wonderful Write.

[Thea]

"The same feelings, the same pain

Has taken over me once again

The rolling tears made me realize

That my condition is still the same"

Simply wonderful...You used simple words but the meaning conveys a lot...So beautiful but quite sad(I think)...Great poem... :)))