the joy of eternity

random poem i thought of today, i think i turned out alright. leave any feedback or criticism as deemed fit.

energy

always devouring

never full 

always wanting more and more

dying again and again just for fun

psychotic tendencies overwhelming on every level

energetic days over and done with

everlasting power and strength achieved again and again

parasitic in nature but also violent in every regard

energy spreading with every cell shed and strewn about on every continent on a deathless realm

power and energy one in the same 

stolen cells bring light to a new problem and solution

an heir without DNA revolving in a bright rebellion forming with each passing year of power

energy resonates through a link with the ascended times from the past and future all combining into one

power and fame indistinguishable from hatred and lust for power and strength

power and name resonate through the water and sea as well as land

houses fall and break as the revolving battle continues to break apart the land, time and reality

lusts of the bodily pleasures are forgotten and left behind for a blade and crystal blood through the timeline 

timelines seen and recorded but forgotten without and details left 

power and time revolving without lost of the cycle of time and energy interfered

a dark deal 

violent outbreak of timeless blindness and weakness with little cure but time

devouring powers that only grant weaknesses without time and death

death resonating but impossible without help

power and energy fuse into a mixture nonexistence without help to death

the existence of others who mean little to you become tolerable

friendships form within a fraction of peaceful times

unity under all but not equal or united

power and energy on the verge of death and destructions of the hopeful future

the names of the dead ring out and destruction is imminent

death returns all 

all return once the age is ended

death will return the savior to his home

Reviews

[lessa (kenzie)]

Not a bad write, I liked this, interesting and well written

[TormentedTales]

I really liked this poem. From beginning to end. The vibe I got from it was very contradictory to itself in some ways which played out great. Also, the imagery used was spot on.

[prymore]

Thank you.