O great oyak

This was just a random thought that turned into a sort of "prayer" and now i'm associating it with a cult in one of my novels.

power everlasting

throughout all time

Oyak

O Oyak

your everlasting might and strength shall ascend all time and space

O great and mighty meakezy your name shall never be forgotten

through all the lands your name is known and honored

Oyak O great Oyak

from creation councilor to the perfection era you are known

you have but to begin your name and we come

hair from black to white to bright silver

creation councilor to perfection

O mighty Oyak come to us in our moments of doubt and wash away our suffering

oyak we follow but not worship for it is your desire

from seakeyan to pandora and stardust e follow

to perfection door we go to fight with you O mighty Oyak

even with no core you go on through lands and lives

time and age no longer hold you in its grasp

perfection even for milliseconds will purify age

returned to black with light gray to snow white hair

cloaks spun of the finest energy silk with secal throughout

you nana and anachoo create us anew with no love

you leave for our good and your fortune

O great Oyak survive well and through as you always do

Reviews

[LazerRays]

Nice! The poem is like a prayer but not worhipping. More like a commitment.
Nice!

[lessa (kenzie)]

O mighty Oyak come to us in our moments of doubt and wash away our suffering
oyak we follow but not worship for it is your desire
from seakeyan to pandora and stardust e follow

I really enjoyed this part, this is a really good write