Ok

Ok

A Poem by Healed but Scarred

You asked if I wanted a hug.
I said I'm fine. I'm over it
You looked at me concerned
But I shook my head and said I was ok.

But I wasn't.  I'm not ok!
My heart is bleeding. My soul is crying.
My tears have dried up, but I'm still dying.
But I shook my head and said I was ok.

© 2017 Healed but Scarred


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It is so heart wrenching when one has to hide the pain from others and it troubles more to hide the pain from themselves. Beautifully written I loved the flow of emotions I liked how the person was repeatedly asking whether the person was okay. Very well written.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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It is so heart wrenching when one has to hide the pain from others and it troubles more to hide the pain from themselves. Beautifully written I loved the flow of emotions I liked how the person was repeatedly asking whether the person was okay. Very well written.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Healed but Scarred
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One of my ways to relieve negative emotions whether it be pain or anger, I tend to write little poems. I always want to share my poems, but I guess I'm too scared people will find out its about them. more..

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