GPS (God's Positioning System)

GPS (God's Positioning System)

A Poem by Pete
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Heaven is under our feet as well as over our heads. - Thoreau

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I'll know that I'm ready for Heaven when I can be happy in Hell.
I just hope that God has more patience than I ...
... and a better GPS ...



© 2019 Pete


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Pete
"We now no longer camp as for a night, but have settled down on earth and forgotten heaven." - Thoreau

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happy in hell....hmmmmmmmm not quite sure one would be there if happy at all ..but i get the point .. i like the quotes from Thoreau ..they add some solidity to your poem ..i like the humor and say to me self .. God is laughing and has lots of patience .. and most assuredly the best of GPS systems of all ... quite simply ... love ;) i always appreciate poetry that sets a course for my thoughts to ponder the Creator .. its 3:40 AM as i get up very early ... so thinking on such things now kind of catapults me rather towards a finer day than not

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

4 Years Ago

Lol. God doth have a sense of humor and the luxury of eternity. i've never known him to be in a hu.. read more
Einstein Noodle

4 Years Ago

lots of wisdom in what you say says i ... straight and true ;)))))))))))))))))



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Love this short, punchy satirical look at heaven and hell. There is something in that message though. If one is prepared for hell, heaven can't be that bad!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

4 Years Ago

thanks. good point john - if we're happy in hell, how will we know when we're in heaven? ... :)
A better GPS, and Eddie Money. It'll be like going home again!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

4 Years Ago

eddie just passed away recently. he was classic and always will be in my book. a good gps is key no.. read more
Kelly Scheppers

4 Years Ago

I'd be lost without my GPS! Eddie was a fave of mine, too. Always watched his reality show on AXSt.. read more
Love that first Thoreau quote....one of my favorites. Your words put a smile on my face. We all hope there is a heaven and that we will someday be there.....if it truly exists. A lot said here. Lydi**

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

4 Years Ago

thanks lydi. it's amazing how many classic, timeless things thoreau wrote and touched on isn't it? .. read more
Lydia Shutter

4 Years Ago

Yes, it is amazing. His quotes are timeless.
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happy in hell....hmmmmmmmm not quite sure one would be there if happy at all ..but i get the point .. i like the quotes from Thoreau ..they add some solidity to your poem ..i like the humor and say to me self .. God is laughing and has lots of patience .. and most assuredly the best of GPS systems of all ... quite simply ... love ;) i always appreciate poetry that sets a course for my thoughts to ponder the Creator .. its 3:40 AM as i get up very early ... so thinking on such things now kind of catapults me rather towards a finer day than not

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

4 Years Ago

Lol. God doth have a sense of humor and the luxury of eternity. i've never known him to be in a hu.. read more
Einstein Noodle

4 Years Ago

lots of wisdom in what you say says i ... straight and true ;)))))))))))))))))

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Added on October 8, 2019
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I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..

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