The Bottom Line

The Bottom Line

A Poem by Pete
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Faith never makes a confession. - Thoreau

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preaching the day
confessing the night
trying to get it right
wondering if there's another way
guess i'll be okay
as long as neither has anything more to say

with folded hands and unruly flesh i pray
together with a heavy heart and burdened soul i tip the scales and weigh
penny for my sin
ten for a dime
cutting to the chase
not a moment too soon
running out of time
finally arriving at

the bottom line



© 2023 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
"Tom Hyde, the tinker, standing on the gallows, was asked if he had anything to say. "Tell the tailors," said he, "to remember to make a knot in their thread before they take the first stitch." His companion's prayer is forgotten." - Thoreau

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An awesome poem of deep introductions and introspection. May your spirituality keep liberating the soul.
You are brilliant 👏

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

10 Months Ago

what's right is right and what's wrong is wrong being able to distinguish and admit not always easy.. read more
Sami Khalil

10 Months Ago

All true and well said. You are welcome sir Pete. Happy 4th

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