Finally Letting Us In

Finally Letting Us In

A Poem by Pete
"

Invariably our best nights were those when it rained. - Thoreau

"
As the rain comes down �

rain falls like silken threads
sewing faith and truth
echoing time
ushering the ages
unrolling a divine scroll of tears and forlorn years
unable to permeate or tarnish all that is gold
granting me both a spiritual and fleshly heirloom

we know that eternity has no end
but when does it begin
a kiss touches so much more than lips
the deluge washes away my love
drenching my skin
i aspire to make my way through it
at least until someone opens the obscure passageway
finally letting us in



© 2023 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
"The forests are held cheap after the white pine has been culled out; and the explorers and hunters pray for rain only to clear the atmosphere of smoke." - Thoreau

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I learned a word today on another poets page. Pluriphile. This is certainly a plurophiles poem. The atmosphere catches you imediately.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

8 Months Ago

well you just taught me something. i believe you mean pluviophile - One who loves rain; one who fin.. read more
Ken Simm.

8 Months Ago

Yeah I mixed it up with those that always misspell words.

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Pete
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I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..

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