Planet Claire

Planet Claire

A Poem by Pete
"

Why should I feel lonely? Is not our planet in the Milky Way?” - Thoreau

"
Planet Claire Art Print by ManMade Art �

with a clicker for a brain
hardly what you'd call a plain jane
along with the vision of a dirty window pane
claiming an interplanetary reign
feigning to be sane
limping and lame without a sugar cane
the missing link in a groovy, gyrating chain
double-wrapped in existential cellophane
having much to gain
exceedingly vain
crooning an out-of-this-world, new wave strain
she being love's thorny rose and troubling bane
me, in white shoes, her fascinated, blinded swain
memories of her visit now nothing more than a stubborn stain

lost in the throws of hypnotizing bongos
and sheer, torn pantyhose
not to mention having eleven toes
and the coolest-ever looking clothes
along with everything that clairvoyance claims it knows
going where an axis of rotation goes
highly skilled in the art of being a brown-nose
hardly one to oppose
her curtain rose for numerous shows
people fighting for tickets to be in the first few rows
dancing and forgetting their woes
choosing rhythm's poetry over gravity's prose
quivers of penetrating arrows shot from electric bows
hitting all the highs as well as the lows

traveling on the wings of a prayer
above the clouds in extraterrestrial air
hailing from a different lair
a cosmic soothsayer
with weird, big hair
and a complexion so fair
along with an impenetrable, unshakeable stare
not one to be accused of being a square
not fond of long lines, she cut in front of others and rarely wore underwear
a song being all she'd ever share
impromptu and never able to prepare
she came from planet claire
not bothering to pay the fare
what's worse, she didn't even seem to care
but she sure knew how to dance and what to wear
her music, she did blare
trust me, i was there
i double-dare, pinky-promise and hand-on-bible swear



© 2023 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
“If there is nothing new on the earth, still the traveler always has a resource in the skies. They are constantly turning a new page to view. The wind sets the types on this blue ground, and the inquiring may always read a new truth there.” - Thoreau

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Great song, and an equally good write Pete..

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

4 Months Ago

they surely had a unique, new wave sound. merry christmas andrew ... :)
andrew mitchell

4 Months Ago

Merry Xmas Pete.😀

Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

122 Views
1 Review
Added on December 22, 2023
Last Updated on December 24, 2023

Author

Pete
Pete

Boston, MA



About
I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..

Writing