Sackcloth Without Ashes

Sackcloth Without Ashes

A Poem by Pete
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As you simplify your life, the laws of the universe will be simpler; solitude will not be solitude, poverty will not be poverty, nor weakness weakness. - Thoreau

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Gunny sack - Wikipedia

the grass was short and yielded not to the day's breeze
the sky was high and heavy with the tipped weightage of passing clouds
sort of like when you yearn to be alone despite clambering, jibbering crowds
my life was full of nothing
just the way i like things
no one pulling my strings
as pete sings, 'did you steal my money'
you can take my honey
hop around like the easter bunny
no matter, my sky will still be sunny
a comedy of errors always funny
as i try to jump over the dirty river
before a wide, flowing mouth that has no choice but to deliver
wearing nothing but a sack of gunny



© 2025 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
"I would rather sit on a pumpkin and have it all to myself, than be crowded on a velvet cushion". - Thoreau

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there is something wonderful and inspiring about solitude....most of the time we don't need chaos around us to function ....one great thing about solitude is that you don't have to answer to anyone, no matter what and being alone is also a good learning experience for those of us in big families or married or whatever....
crowds are annoying.. but you can hardly get way from them in NYC!!! Nice write Pete
Warmly, B

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Powerful work, my friend.

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Pete

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thanks for the two cents twc. i owe you some change back.
there is something wonderful and inspiring about solitude....most of the time we don't need chaos around us to function ....one great thing about solitude is that you don't have to answer to anyone, no matter what and being alone is also a good learning experience for those of us in big families or married or whatever....
crowds are annoying.. but you can hardly get way from them in NYC!!! Nice write Pete
Warmly, B

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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