Before The Rooster Crows

Before The Rooster Crows

A Poem by Pete
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At death our friends and relations either draw nearer to us and are found out, or depart further from us and are forgotten. Friends are as often brought nearer together as separated by death. - Thorea

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White Flower Floating on Water · Free ...

at the midnight hour
float me down the tired river
with a white flower

© 2025 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
“Time is but the stream I go a-fishing in. I drink at it; but while I drink I see the sandy bottom and detect how shallow it is. Its thin current slides away, but eternity remains. I would drink deeper; fish in the sky, whose bottom is pebbly with stars.” - Thoreau

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This piece is understated yet awash with "beautiful."
Very 'japanese' - a cultural aesthetic that is to be...savoured.
Less is more, and quite, quite enough.
Nicely done!

Posted 4 Hours Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

4 Hours Ago

thank you for taking the plunge.

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Pete
Pete

Boston, MA



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I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..

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