SOS

SOS

A Poem by Pete
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He enjoys true leisure who has time to improve his soul's estate. - Thoreau

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11,800+ Wooden Raft Stock Photos ...

against the current
against my pride
i wanna paddle a hogtied raft
'til my tattered sail catches an updraft
to stoke my faith and chase away these ho-hums
gonna take along my oompa loompa tuba to go with the steel drums, 
to where the stiped, blowfish dive deep with their innocent scuba
don't wanna wash ashore on castro's old cuba
hell no
better the white sand and palm trees on the island of a saved soul's aruba



© 2025 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
"All our Concord waters have two colors at least; one when viewed at a distance, and another, more proper, close at hand." - Thoreau

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Wow!
I feel the poet wants to energise his faith and sail to a good place where sandy beaches are full of women in Bikinis and tourists flock to good restaurants and shops.
Money can help a lot to fulfill his dreams.

Posted 4 Days Ago



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Added on May 29, 2025
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Pete
Pete

Boston, MA



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I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..

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