Met Someone

Met Someone

A Poem by The Jive

The very end I'd been dreading
had come to pass
revealed as though he were reading aloud my nightmare
as though I had WILLED it into reality
Some wanton fate smelled blood in the water

© 2012 The Jive


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very emotional..:D i like the title but maybe instead of WILLED you could make willed italicized..:) Bravo!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it! It involves a lot of thought.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

deep and intriguing, : )

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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The Jive
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I haven't written poetry since classes in college, which has been a few years. When I look back at that stuff I feel it is laughably bad, so I'm a bit self conscious. I've been inspired lately (mostly.. more..

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