Humid

Humid

A Poem by The Jive

tonight the thick air hums
a mellow pink thrill
warm;
as the electric slide 
of a lover's body

© 2012 The Jive


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The Jive
"electric slide" is intentionally ridiculous.

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Sounds like What it would be like if a neon light had a baby with the electric slide dance. Its the lovechild of ecstasy and epiphany.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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 Added on June 9, 2012
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I haven't written poetry since classes in college, which has been a few years. When I look back at that stuff I feel it is laughably bad, so I'm a bit self conscious. I've been inspired lately (mostly.. more..

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