Do You Love?

Poem I made up in five minutes. Some parts may not rymhe, and I apologize.

Do You Love?

by: Molly

How can you be so blue?

When the facts are so true.
You try to ignore,

But you need it more.

Do you love?

I know you do.

Love is a beautiful thing,
but it can be a deadly sting.

Your heart is black.

I know what you lack.
You had a nack for it.

You've got to get it back.
Living in a world without a special one,

can be a lonley ton.

It's no fun.

Tell me, if I help you,

promise to come through.

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

I loved this piece of writing and the way with which you raised your questions here....
"Do you love" - The repetition of this line gave a very appealing feel to the poem :)