Do You Love?

Do You Love?

A Poem by Molly

Poem I made up in five minutes. Some parts may not rymhe, and I apologize.

Do You Love?
by: Molly
How can you be so blue?
When the facts are so true.
You try to ignore,
But you need it more.
Do you love?
I know you do.
Love is a beautiful thing,
but it can be a deadly sting.
Your heart is black.
I know what you lack.
You had a nack for it.
You've got to get it back.
Living in a world without a special one,
can be a lonley ton.
It's no fun.
Tell me, if I help you,
promise to come through.

© 2009 Molly

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I loved this piece of writing and the way with which you raised your questions here....
"Do you love" - The repetition of this line gave a very appealing feel to the poem :)

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Added on February 27, 2009



Franklin, TN

Well, I am in a awesome school and the last grade. I like bright colors and anything happy. I HATE pessitmist people. I love to read, draw, write, and sing. more..