Don't Forget

It's hard leaving someone and something special :)

I left because I had to.

I know tonight you'll sleep feeling blue.

But remember my last words to you,

I would never ever find someone so lovely and true.

You made me love myself even more,

Just by simply shaping my heart's inner core.

You never fail to make me smile,

With your awkward yet poetic comedic style.

Don't forget how much you mean to me,

How I thank God you, He made me see.

Such a wonderful creature deserving of love and care.

My love to you; I'll save you from the toughest of bears.

Don't forget that I love you so much,

Pray for me and think of how I would like to have your touch.

You're my dream girl, just defining perfection.

Amazingly adorable artist, just a hint of alliteration.

Don't forget how destiny and God will decide.

If our love is the love that is meant for us, in time we'll collide.

We'll collide for a second time and that second chance,

I would not let anything refrain me from seeing your face's beautiful glance.

Reviews

[Jazique]

Awe so sweet. I smiling as you describe such a wonderful poem to describe a love for someone and you truly know its meant to be if God and destiney are on your side. Well done with the words of descripstions such as "You never fail to make me smile, With your awkward yet poetic comedic style."As some of your words went to well in a rhylming way in such a flow a flow of emotions. Keep up the excellent work.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Interesting way of loving someone, indeed love works in mysterious ways. And in this, i like how you wrote this line:
"Amazingly adorable artist, just a hint of alliteration."
Nice write.

[Jeremy Baker]

A sincere and heartfelt poem, very moving and stylish.

[Raven Starhawk]

Such a marvelous addition. I believe this speaks volumes of your charming ability to conceive poetry.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

This is a real nice romantic poem!
So far, my favorite piece from you.

[Dahlia Phoenix]

If you really love that someone, why leave them for them to give you a second chance? Of course, love works in mysterious ways. We always find that one person who will change our view on life and ourselves. That's what makes it amazing.