Endurance waned

Endurance waned

A Poem by paul sal.....
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I don't know about you but I've had enough of this Winter...

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                                                 The birth of Spring
                                                 is sitting upon my knee.

                                                 I touch it's soft shoulders
                                                 with pangs of gratefulness.

                                                 Warm my heart 
                                                 oh Spring,oh Spring,

                                                 I've endured Winters' grasp
                                                 for as long as I can.       

© 2014 paul sal.....


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Very beautiful. Musical. And on a side note, I thoroughly agree.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Looking upon a new season to tie up the bitter conditions of the prior, and knowing for certain that it will definitely be a time of healing; calming poetry, as always. Keep it up.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

paul sal.....

10 Years Ago

thank you and do the same.....
I touch it's soft shoulders
with pangs of gratefulness.

Great write, definitely endured hardships of the past, looking at the spring of life, welcoming it wholeheartedly even before get released from winters grasp, and of course mind filled with gratefulness, even if pain from winter is only waning, best way to think, great footing on reality even welcoming springs of life, enjoyed, thanks for sharing, take care

Posted 10 Years Ago


I so want winter to end! This was a nicely written poem. Well done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

paul sal.....

10 Years Ago

thanks for stopping by
paul sal.....

10 Years Ago

cant kind of fish did you catch?
Erik Daniel

10 Years Ago

It is a bass in my picture.

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paul sal.....
paul sal.....

Brentwood, NY



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