Autumn

Autumn

A Poem by paul sal.....

                                                      Fall before me, crimson affect
                                                      Your benefactor is also mine
                                                      Believe in my joy of your colors
                                                      The effect will be reds and yellows
                                                      Orange and rust
                                                      White will follow.
                                                      Close behind will be our green
                                                      Not of envy, but life.
  

© 2014 paul sal.....


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Gorgeous. Well versed. You summed the cycle beautifully.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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paul sal.....

10 Years Ago

The cycle is a circle and we follow the circumference until we decide to break out of the circle and.. read more
Fall before me, crimson affect
Your benefactor is also mine
A great write and a beautiful painting, if one shares the joy or colors of another one, the effect will be synergistic or crimson affect, so the picture or painting will be more amiable, excellent insight and thought provoking, but in reality most often this situation is a mirage, enjoyed fully

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Dee
I like this....it is like your words create a mental painting...love how you used green without envy

Posted 10 Years Ago


paul sal.....

10 Years Ago

there are those that say i am mental, thank you DEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
I love your portrayal of the seasons through colors, beginning with a red and yellow, followed by white, succeeded by the color of green: the same color of the plants that sprout in the dawn of spring. Well done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


paul sal.....

10 Years Ago

Thank you, I am looking forward to the green

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Added on February 26, 2014
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paul sal.....
paul sal.....

Brentwood, NY



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Just a simple human wondering why we live in such turmoil and working in a small way to make it better....I like cats stevens, mozaart, neil young, beethoven, harry chapin, ernest chausson, passenger,.. more..

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