Grim Reaper

Grim Reaper

A Poem by Jofer Serapio
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I don't really remember what movie inspired this little piece but it had something to do with cowboys, a farmer who killed his whole family, wilting sunflower fields and dozens and dozens of crows.

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I bid adieu
To you, my good man.
Time has been harsh
Your past lifeless

Your clothes drenched in blood
Hair greased, face dirtied.
You should give up,
Eases the pain a bit.

Life has quit on you
So have your sons.
Where is the wife?
All alone, I see.

Death has won them
It will take you soon.
Hush! Lay still.
Let my blade help.

Snikt!

© 2009 Jofer Serapio


Author's Note

Jofer Serapio
Image Disclaimer: I do not own the image included. I just found that it suited my piece so there you go. Special thanks to the original artist.

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It was a bit too short and too fast. Just need a little bit more of the details and the flows as well...

On the other hand, it's still good tho...


Posted 15 Years Ago


I need more.:) actually, I was wondering whose point of view this is, the reaper or someone else?

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 11, 2008
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Jofer Serapio
Jofer Serapio

Paranaque City, Metro Manila, and Kalibo, Aklan, Philippines



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