alone

In the dark,

i can see you,

in the dark,

you glow to a gloomy green state.

your skeletal face, hollow,

no emotion present,

standing there,

holding yourself low.

 

the people around,

stare at the ground,

why are you like this,

my very old friend.

But there you were,

there you went,

vanished,

into the mist of death.

you left me.

 you said you didnt want to,

                      but you did.

 

 

 

now im alone,

ill be gone soon,

we can be still, together again.

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[terisa green]

:)

[typingaway]

Incredible!!

[typingaway]

Amazing!!

[sushi]

Awesome. I really liked your approach. There was sentiment at the end.

"now im alone,
ill be gone soon,
we can be still, together again."

The pain of losing a friend as been expressed deeply.

Well written..