lost inspiration

lost inspiration

A Poem by Sophie Titch

Ive lost it,

This thing that i had.

It flowed in my mind,

Im afraid it may be gone,

It would dance around in my brain,

Swirling through my thoughts,

Allowing me to think,

Of something that is fine.

 

Then all of a sudden,

The thing that i thought i had lost,

Came back to me as i thought about it more,

I didnt lose it,

My mind just stopeed thinking,

And now i have it back.

 

It made me realize the power,

That i hold in my mind,

No one can take it.

It just keeps growing,

With every thing i do.

 

Like a sponge, it only takes.

 

 

© 2011 Sophie Titch


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Sophie Titch
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A vivid write. Liked the last like a lot.

"Like a sponge, it only takes."

It's true. The ability to remember things always keeps increasing with more we use. The first line started with a negative but while i reached the end of the lines it turned happy. I just got hung to the last line....

Thanks for sharing...

Posted 13 Years Ago


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This was a really good read, and it doesn't matter if you loose your inspiration, it's obvious that you can find it somewhere else... good job :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Cool. :-) This hows that you obviously have power and that it was once taken away from you. :-) This is a really good read. :-)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Sophie Titch
Sophie Titch

Darlington, England, United Kingdom



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