Gone

Gone

A Poem by Rachelah
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Being left again, same thing that happens every time. However never begrudging how they abandon you, for you love them too deeply to ever end it all. You never could end it all, for what would be the point of living without those you love.

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Gone
Ripped away without mercy
Gone
Torn away from me
After all that time apart
We were finally together again
Felt so great with you beside me
From the start, I knew that it would end
Now you're gone
My old life is back
Only difference is the fresh pain
Outlook on the future so black
Every time you come
Every time you leave
Awakens these feelings of helplessness
Makes my heart a sieve
I live for when I see you
Love doesn't begin to explain
Hate it when you're gone
With so much love comes so much pain
Without you, I know I could not stand
I pray God keeps you safe, in his hand

© 2008 Rachelah


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Wow this is an awesome piece. I love the imagery you use it really brings the loneliness to the foreground and you really make the reader feel the pain behind it.
Beautifully done.
`Bobbi

Posted 16 Years Ago



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A Poem by Rachelah