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beauty rushes out from your pores with every lash you take

nobody tries to stop you anymore

you have two suicide attempts and a loving family

you spend long days in bed

Reviews

[JC]

something about this style really appeals to me, blunt but ambiguous...these simple poems to me are the most profound.

[Coyote Poetry]

You create sad places and desperate place in the poem. You used the words well. Making the reader feel the emptiness and the loss of concern for life. I hope the poem is fiction. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote