high

you're like the ending of a wonderful high

or a drunken night

it all ends with me feeling like death has won

flowing out of my mouth

and into my bathroom toilet 

Reviews

[T0TS]

Gosh, your poem took me back to my college days...I love the realism...nicely done.

[Pete]

wow. very graphic imagery. but you write from your heart/feelings - the best way. well done.