Why?

i have cried

my teardrops have fallen like rain

i become depressed

once again

 

i almost did

something i shouldn't do

does this ever

happen to you

 

i sat on the edge of my bed

blade in hand

why i almost did it

i cant understand

 

i need to learn

to control myself

someone needs to show me how

i need help

Reviews

[Luther]

thank you again for your lovely comment, it is so nice to hear what others think of my writings, especially from other poets. i really liked this piece, superbly written. the second very is wonderfully put and creates a truely personal feel, in the way it talks directly to the reader. very well written xxx

[Jenny]

thanks for the kind words. I just picked out a random poem of yours to read, and I'm glad i picked this one it has encroged me to read more of your writeing. It is a realy good poem!