If You Were Me

If You Were Me

A Poem by r

what if one day
you were me
think of how much fun
that wouild be

you go to school
do your work
try to stay away
from all the jerks

volleyball practice
at 2:45
you will do lots of runnin
if you value your life

come home
get a shower and something to eat
later on you'll get
a tasty treat

then you go on the computer
and watch tv.
life would be wonderful
if you were me

© 2008 r


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This is interesting..
I llike it :).
you did a wonderful job of conveying who you are.
Keep up the excellent work
Thanx for sharing!

Posted 15 Years Ago


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