Haiku Demise

my first haiku

He lifts the dull knife

Pleasure flashes through his eyes

The beast is unleashed

Reviews

[Tamika]

Though so few words you have been able to capture a feeling for me of both sorrow and eeriness, you've used the words very wisely, I commend you on such a small though wonderful piece of writing!

[Steve]

is he the beast?
or is the beast a tiger?
why did he pick up a dull knife?