Right, Mama?

Right, Mama?

A Poem by ragelmarli
"

A mother is meant to hold, love, care. Keep.

"
Bottled up.

That's mama.

I guess I follow her example.

Clothes all over the floor.
I'm a lady. 
Aren't I?
I should be clean. 
I should be an example.

Poise, modesty, innocence.

I should show some value.
Make myself believe I'm worth owning a clean room.

I'm such a lady.

Bundled into a ball of tears and smeared make up.
Dark circles under my dry eyes.

Aren't you proud mama?

I tried. Here I am.

Bottled up. Bundled up. 
Sleeves stained with the mascara you taught me to wear.
Nose runny.
Chest stinging.

Where's daddy when you need him...

I close my eyes.

Turn it down, she'll get mad.

No, don't.

Tune it all out.

Aren't you proud mama....

© 2013 ragelmarli


Author's Note

ragelmarli
Just a free verse. From the heart.
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This is the best kind of writing, the kind that comes from inside. I can see how much this piece means to you simply by how your writing style changes. Love it. =D

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ragelmarli

11 Years Ago

thank you!! :)
Your heart does well, it is a good and vivid description, as well as being a little obscure; suits a particular taste, which happends to be mind. Good job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ragelmarli

11 Years Ago

Thank you! Means a lot!

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Added on January 28, 2013
Last Updated on February 2, 2013
Tags: Mother, Relationships, Crying, Hurt

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ragelmarli
ragelmarli

Beach Park, IL



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I'm Ragel :) (Ray-Johl) Planning to double major in Creative Writing and Mass Communications and Media. :) I love writing, I love the voice it gives me. I love the chills that come in reaction .. more..

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