a tresure hunt

when looking for my heart

so today i went on a tresure hunt

i was lookin for my heart

i went over the brige of tears

though the hall of guys

stop by mcdonalds for some fries

though the forest of fears 

i finally found my heart

were i should of started

with you

 i always knew :)

 

Reviews

[SheWhoWillNotBeNamed]

Heh, whimsical...
It should be "through" instead of "though" in the 4th and 6th line.
A very nice one, raindroplove:)

[Miu]

Stopping at Mcdonalds is always nessary. But anyway very good poem, I love it.

[Just a Dream]

awsome

[Jake]

Good write. It sounds as if it has an almost nursery-rhyme quality. Well done.

[☯]

Adorable! :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Fun and required taste, loved it, very good read

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

So sweet!