a tear

a tear

A Poem by raindroplove

you used to sing to me

every morning

you come to my room

smile and sing so beautiful

then one more morning you

werent there

no song

today i heard your song

the one youd singed to me

i sat there quitely

taking in the lycies

every cord every drum beat

the before i knew it

a sing tear came down

my face

i didnt wipe it away

i let go

the tear would soon be gone

just the way you did

 

© 2011 raindroplove


Author's Note

raindroplove
yea thanks :I

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Sad but very Beautiful. thank you for sharing
Blessings Kindred poet


you used to sing to me

every morning

you come to my room

smile and sing so beautiful


Posted 5 Years Ago


so sad but very good great job

Posted 7 Years Ago


Really sad and full of emotions. But I suggest rereading it since there are a lot misspellings. But still, this poem's a good one. good job. ;)

Posted 8 Years Ago


sad write, enjoyed that song

Posted 8 Years Ago


this is the song

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wow, this is a pretty cool poem! :D
I love those last two lines, the way you connected the whole poem together in a wonderful ending!

Posted 8 Years Ago


this is a good poem. sad, not much but a little anger good write keep it up

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on September 12, 2011
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