My Composer

My Composer

A Poem by Rainee Whiting

My Composer

 

Its construction exquisite,

intricate detail in each thought.

Solid and hollow surface,

strings tied in a peculiar knot.

 

Curves cut into shape,

an instrument few would know,

then before it he would stand,

his curiosity would grow.

 

Gentle in his grip,

he pulled the piece in tight.

Cautious fingers played,

until the tone was right.

 

Its construction exquisite,

unafraid he pushed his stroke,

vibrations brought to life,

the beauty in each note.

Rainee

© 2017 Rainee Whiting


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A song written in a moment of intimacy is the most tantalizing music to compose.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, you've written this brilliantly! I love the way the composer's hands meticulously shape to her body.

..just lovely, Rainee!

Posted 4 Years Ago



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Rainee Whiting
Rainee Whiting

Las Vegas, NV



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