Pathetic

Tears fall

Down these cheeks

For him

From the night before

Why am I so pathetic

To think he still

Loves me like i do him

My head throbs

For the man

Of my dreams

The tears come

Again

Please go

Please leave

I don't want to feel this pain anymore

Don't let me be so pathetic

Don't let me cry

I don't want to miss him

I don't want to feel this

I love you

Can't you see?

I'm so pathetic

For you

Crying these feelings

That I love you

Let me be with you again

So I won't look so pathetic 

Please let me be held by you

Don't let me fall backwards

I want you

I need you

Right here 

Right now

The tears fall more harshly now

And i want to take it all back

Everything i did

Everything I didn't

Help me out

I don't want to be alone anymore

Can't you see what its done to me?

It's made me so pathetic

So worthless

Nothing wanted

I love you

Yes, this pathetic person

loves you

Please

Come back

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

oh its very human ,there is all mixed emotions ,there are tears,so much of them
please i do not want to look miserable pathetic
but i still love you ,please dont leave ,but those tears,oh yes leave
let me alone with no more tears
i do not want to miss you dont want to see you
do not want you near
but still i cant live with out you ,i am in pain if you are here
or if you go away,and i feel worthless,stop the pain
i love you please come back ,but he will leave
oh humans such well of emotions each pull from one side and i am lost because i am human
wonderful writing,it shows the nature of human with so conflicting emotions,and tendencies,great ,really enjoyed it

[MarchAprilMayJuneJuly]

aww... so sad... but i believe this was a very strong piece! sorry that i haven't reviewed your stuff lately, but i'll try to look at you amazing new pieces like this one! i hope school is great, cause mine sucks... anyways, great piece! i can't wait to read your other stuff!

~may

[Ally Baker]

Kelley!!! i luuhved this poem! You're such a great writer!! I hope you never stop writing!