Love and treat you right

Love and treat you right

A Poem by raiz_0990
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I wanna love you and treat you right,the stars our bed.

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Desire courses through young skin.
Lips full and soft tremble
This passion is mine
Fingers strong and nimble
cross hot flesh.
Ecstasy stolen is divine,when given;like fire.
I want to burn with you.
You will be the Sun
I another star,
when your eclipse comes we will meet 
across the cosmos and make love.
No one will know when you turn from Earth
you face me.
In the moment you look at me there is no one else.
you and I,
face away from the world
swim across the galaxy.
the milky way.
fueled by passion we explode.
You are the world's again
I am just a fan, grateful for stolen moments.
Waiting for our next,praying time passes like sand.

© 2011 raiz_0990


Author's Note

raiz_0990
I wanted each line to have its own picture,I don't know if it communicates,but imagine black shadows moving through each action/each line.

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Added on August 4, 2011
Last Updated on October 25, 2011
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raiz_0990

Rolling Hills, TN



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