A real soldier and his battlefield

omg!you managed I sighed looking at the hustle you were having with your book… I though you’d not recall, But you did by hook or crook…

Yes…those were the unforgettable days of mine As seeing you I've grown in my life… Now you seem to have lost your hustle Don't worry i am always there to help you with your life tussle.

I know that year's have passed,books have changed.. I know how you have put a stop to your startling craze, But dear one the fire in you can never be crashed As they are only numbed and only for a little time do they last….

Now is the time to rise back again, Now is the time to suck of all the pain. Make your radiant fire swarm out from your heart, Which will completely burn your numbness and will get your hustle back to fulfill your art.

your hurdles may be stumpy or awfully high, But you cant be allowed to crumble, you cant be allowed to cry, This isn’t a playground ,it’s a battlefield Hence b a true soldier who always prevails the battle as he only fights for his realm. ........

Reviews

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Pranita, the voice in your words is profoundly strong and sound like you know what you are talking about.

Honestly, I didn't understand the whole piece for I felt the second half of your piece can stand alone in itself as a brand new poem. And the first half is talking about something else. But it's just my opinion and I could be completely incorrect.

I liked what little glimpses of imagery I was able to get.
Please enlighten me with the story of this piece.
I am curious to understand better with more clarity.
-Jyoti

[pranita]

Hi jyoti, thanks for your review, I appreciate you comments.Well, this poem is a dedication to a childhood friend of mine who would struggle with studies but would accomplish good results at the end of the day with her hard work.. and now 10 years later, today , she has been facing some similar problems, so this poem is a comparison between how she was a few years back and how she is and has to be now... hope now you get the gist of the poem:)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Okay now it fits! And I can see the sync between the lines.
Nice concept! Kudos!
And you are welcome, I enjoyed reading it.

[pranita]

@jyoti- My pleasure