Liars war

In this world,

this messed up world,

there are two sides,

to every story,

the good and the bad,

get all mixed up,

causing a liars war,

the liars war turns,

friend aganist friend,

and causes a great big mess,

well the liar sits back delightfully,

watching the war unraval,

until were back at square one,

were the lie might or might not,

Be caught by the ones who played,

parts in the war,

until the lie is discovered,

or the liar gets bored,

the liars war will continue.

Reviews

[Kammy Myles]

Thanks but you mean commas right?

[Daniel Atkinson]

This is a good piece, but watch your grammar. Apostrophes seem to be your biggest problem. Otherwise, well written.