Blind is Cupid

This for my homies on the Page Masters Challenge 11. Inspired by Shakespearean quote "love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; and therefore is winged Cupid painted blind".

Blind is Cupid and his arrows are misguided

With no choice we must abide.

Blind is Cupid but he listens to things of sound

He hears our flirting and  makes us bound

Blind is Cupid and he only goes with his gut

And he aimed and aimed hard for out butts.

Blind is Cupid and he almost always horribly wrong

But it's not his fault for he listens to too many love songs.

Reviews

[Arthur Crow]

I thought this was excellent and very original.. you created just the right tone here to hold the readers attention. Loved the flow and rhyme, much enjoyed!

And thanks for your review of my work.

[Sarah Hale]

... That was... interesting I have a question though is "out butts" or "Our butts"? cause that's gonna bug me... ^^ it's kinda comical too that's a good thing.

[Jasmin]

I very much liked this poem and the inspiration you got it from I could see that connection, and i got the meaning. Very good write