Muscial Hall

Wrote this after I walked through the music department on campus and i could hear at least ten different instruments, each playing different songs. It was magical

As I walk down this hall

people play

upon their instruments

playing different songs

simultaneously

 

They some how blend into one

perfect song

as I listen closely

to each muscian open

their hearts upon

strings

keys

horn

Drum(s)

 

They each have a soul to share

and they do so in sound

so listen closely and see

what they found

Reviews

[Tony]

I have read many young writers here in the cafe. And pretty much universally, the lack of experience in life, if not in writing, shows through. And quite frankly, I don't get much provocation from the reading.
However, there are exceptions.
This was a very clean piece of work in more than one way.
How refreshing to read something that is entertaining and clever, without feeling like I should bathe afterward.
You sir, are a word compressor.

[Marlena]

Pretty, and you're right, if a band plays it right they can sound like just one person, sort of, you know, meshed together. You spelled "simultaneously" wrong, by the way, you forgot the "t" I think. Other than that, I really liked this. I used to be in a school band, and I remember when we practiced we always sounded....Bad XD But then on the night of the concert or whatever, everyone would pick it up and put it together like the way you said in the poem. Nice work, very real.