Reveries of an innocent mind !!

Reveries of an innocent mind !!

A Poem by Prateek

Hope is something which in its true and purest form has the power to change the world..Struggles are omnipresent..but what i tend to do is to observe. Observe how nature teaches us to hope !!


The feet never misses to crush,
the grass never ceases to grow…
How long can the soil constantly fend,
I just hope this fight will end….

The water never feels for the pebbles,
and the stones still stand still…
How long will the rocks try to blend,
I just hope this fight will end…

There aint no ruth for trees by wind,
the leaves still hold on…
How far still, are the birds from land,
I just hope this fight will end…

Cries still are heard, eyes still look upto the sky,
sleeves are rolled up, despite all the sly…
sands changed color, buth there are still walls to mend,
I just hope these fights soon end…

Arms give up, Ears crave for the voice,
They say its not sane to dream with open eyes…
Each day in prayer, this head bends,
Im sure this fight will ‘soon’ end…

I read your words, sense the pain,
still you smile and the tears drain…
Soon the music will dawn, the thirst will quench,
The white dove will reach the sand and the fight will end…!!!

© 2012 Prateek

Author's Note

If you could understand the intent, I will believe my effort was fruitful. :)

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Added on September 30, 2012
Last Updated on September 30, 2012
Tags: alone, belief, bliss, confidence, contemplation, crime, day, distance, dream, effort, faith, feelings, future, glory, god, heart, helpless, hope, hurt, imagine, journey, life, lost love, love, luck



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