Tribute to John Lennon !!

Tribute to John Lennon !!

A Poem by Prateek
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John Lennon has a beautiful song "Imagine"..I just reused the flow and wrote similar emotions..!!

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imagine there is no luck

its not very hard to do….

ev1 gets, what he sweats

no envy comes to you…


You may say Im a dreamer..

but im not the only one

I hope someday you ll join me..

and fear would be for none


imagine there is no silence

Im sure you can, if you try…

noone did anythin to hide

nothing to worry, and nothing to cry…


You may say Im a dreamer..

but im not the only one

I hope someday you ll join me..

and there wud be no murk to shun…….

© 2012 Prateek


Author's Note

Prateek
Intention is not plagiarism, its a tribute to a beautiful song in its own way. There are new thoughts, reused words, reused flow.

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I enjoyed the song like rhythem, however, you do need to go back and correct your spelling. A poem is not a poem unless the words were intentionally spelt incorrectly, then that makes it a song along the lines of pop genre.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AllyKinzz:)

7 Years Ago

oh , ok i see i wasnt sure if the short spelling was intentional or not. i apologies if i seemed rud.. read more
Prateek

7 Years Ago

oh not at all.. :)
Suggestions can only help.. :)
Thanks for your comments..:)
AllyKinzz:)

7 Years Ago

:)

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Prateek

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