Can't hold me in.

Bang, Bang,Bang
Bang, Bang, Bang
My punches and kicks shake the metal cage.

Bang,Bang, Bang
Bang, Bang, Bang
Punch.
Kick.
Scream.

You might think "No she can't get out".
You might think "She can't escape".
Well honey your wrong!
Because you can't hold me in!
Can't hold me in!
If you try you fail because you can't hold me in!

Bag, Bang, Bang
Bang, Bang, Bang
Is what you hear as I finally escape my metal cage.

Author's Note

don't worry about grammar

Reviews

[Mason]

I agree. This poem is good. Repeating the "Bang, Bang, Bang" sound is kind of haunting. When you hear a caged animal making these noises over and over, it's frightening. The punching; the kicking; the screaming; all very good. Take an animal from its natural habitat and it will fight long and hard to break free.

[Taylor H.]

The ending was sloppy but I liked this poem. It reminded me of a song

[Punk rocker]

this poem I think is really good but I may be wrong so tell me what you think