On Bonding

I love his disorders

I find myself craving intelligence

Panics come in the form of lawyers

And comfort in his elegance 

I fear I just may lose it

I can't find the words to tell you

Seems to be the perfect fit

When I never know what to do

I don't know who I am

How can I expect this to progress

I want to make him understand

The pause in my failed success 

Is this who you love

Or am I no longer the same

I never seem to talk much

But I'm always saying your name

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

we all have disorders---and sometimes like minds and hearts attract...or perhaps just those with opposite disorders...

"i want to make him understand/ the pause in my failed success"

i can identify with this from the male point of view..i have had the "hers" that i would like to make understand.

jacob

[Rahul]

Nicely penned. once again you got me. I loved your theme and your imaginary's great here.
nice flow of ink.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

When we have a let down it is natural for us to feel unworthy of the love we receive... as humans we linger to much on the negatives in life and don't embrace the positives enough.

[Silvario]

Again you display intelligent and creative use of the language and in doing so send a rather poignant message.
A very nice write!

[soliloquy]

I can relate......especially to the last two lines. Definitely.

Is this write a clue to your mind or a portion to your 500 piece puzzle?

[Sami Khalil]

The pause in my failed success
is thiswho you love.
A nice write.