Beauty-volts.

Dedicated to & Inspired by my dear Friend who is a wonderful and a Beautiful Human being. "Aashna Singh."

Yellow light in slow motion drenching her completely,
Hair artistically rolled over, dropping sophistry drop by drop,
from all edges.

Radiant blank stare like an unexplored cosmic space,
open to new discoveries, open to new theories.
Left eye - in urge to explore, Both together have a promise filled with desires -
not to be spoken of.

Yellow atoms reflect from cheeks, further dropping a photon or two.
Simply to leave its footprints on the history of beauty.

Crisp upper lip, with gratitude and plausible efforts,
stops the gushing blood waiting to be explored in the veins.
Puts an end to the uprising in the blood cells.

Love with pinch of electricity runs through thin air,
owning everything and anything, as she tuns to 45 degree angle to get clicked.

There right there - in this very moment which is,
Like a no man's land between
the soul and the Mind. I realize,

I knew not that she was drunk until I read it on her glowing brow.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is amazing. The description and usage of words made the poem necessary to read a few times to catch the strength in the words in your poem.
"Crisp upper lip, with gratitude and plausible efforts"
The detail and description create a beautiful picture of this woman. a outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Lilly Negoi]

the last line blew my mind completely :)). the description is entirely exceptional!

[Emily B]

glowing praise of your friend

[Ruth]

The reader can always see the person you write about this is that vivid!
You have a great talent for creating work that is potently surreal yet holds amazing beauty!

"There right there - in this very moment which is,
Like a no man's land between
the soul and the Mind. I realize, "............I have to say, these lines are seriously moving! Wonderful work!
xx

[Ladysue]

This was so beautifully written with rich color to describe your friend. A good piece of writing...

[Brittany W]

this was a very good piece, you described your friend with much detail, i really like this.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

incredibly lyrical poetic rapture~!

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. electrifying ... she has it all going for her ... and it's amazingly beautiful to witness ... and of course ... alcohol has some crazy powers ... there's a distinct resonance of urdu in the way you describe her ... guess she must've been speechless when she read this ... :) ...

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what beautiful phrase you use to describe your friend..eloquent